IN THE OFFING

Photocopy from 5th February: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_Nb3d84W0THZ2tIdUZCNHV2dkE/view?usp=sharing
         
                                                                 How to get  DaRecorder:   https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_Nb3d84W0THMDB3TFJXTkFwbjg/view?usp=sharing

About wordy expressions:  
    
       http://www.perfectyourenglish.com/writing/phrases-to-omit.htm
       http://www.perfectyourenglish.com/writing/write-concisely.htm

       http://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/CCS_wordyphrases.html

       http://www.perfectyourenglish.com/writing/phrases-to-avoid.htm

       http://www.lincoln.edu/mhs/owl/redundant.html